Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Homework 4 9/17/13



Your reaction to Amanda’s case

I don’t think Amanda is truly falsely accused since she had failed to include internal citation although of getting an F in the course and bad reputation on the Internet are harsh tribulations to her.

Turnitin’s demo shows it is a very advanced software which titled it self as ‘the global leader in addressing plagiarism’ and is used by many universities. I am shocked when I see instructor may just use the assessment in Turnitin to value students’ essays. I think instructors should be responsible to their students and view their students’ essays carefully. And of course, all students wants their teachers to be more benevolent when they met the similar kind of issue of Amanda’s.

Monday, September 16, 2013

Homework #4


In the Amanda’s case, Amanda was accused by the University for plagiarism, and then she posted the her case on public and tell people the injustice she felt from the university. Personally, I felt that both the university and Amanda did something wrong.
For the university, they just use the software ‘Turnitin’, to grade students’ homework, but machine sometimes will make many errors. For example the software claims that Amanda’s paper plagiarize the Eskimo website, even though that Amanda’s paper is about the same-sex marriage in Texas which seems have no direct relation to the Eskimo. So the school should not rely too much on the technology. Besides, the university grades the score and the percentage of the plagiarism too arbitrarily.  What’s more, the university, according to the article, didn’t give Amanda the opportunity to state her disagreement about the Plagiarism.  
However, Amanda herself also made some errors. In the article, there was a person pointing out that she didn’t cite content correctly with the rrul link; instead she just put the website. What’s more, when she responded to other people’s comment, there is no need to put that thumbnail followed her answers. The thumbnail looks like being taken on the party, and may make people feel that Amada is a party animal and had tense relation with books, and didn’t study. 

Homework # 4



In Amanda’s case, she was accused of plagiarizing because of the report from Turnitin, a prevailing software used for finding plagiarism. Everyone that included the professor, Amanda and those outsiders did something wrong. First of all, although Turnitin simplified the process of finding instances of Plagiarism, the professor who made the decision that Amanda plagiarized others’ work should not simply trust the report from software instead of spending time tracking back those resources of the paper. As for Amanda, she really made her situation worse because of those aggressive comments online. Besides, those spectators have not even read Amanda’s paper, but they criticized Amanda for plagiarizing others’ work sightlessly.

Amanda’s tragedy revealed how severe Plagiarism is in the academic field, in which everyone tries to protect their ownership of ideas. The punishment for plagiarism does encourage some scholars to generate new ideas because anyone who uses their idea is supposed to honor the scholar in their paper. However, are those harsh punishments for plagiarism really good for the academic development? People know nothing when they are born, but they acquire knowledge from numerous resources and generate new ideas eventually. Plagiarism is a burden because people cannot gather information freely without considering where they got their resources from. In other words, scholars who come up with new ideas can’t pay one hundred percent of their attention on collaborating information and forming new ideas, but have to constantly worry about what severe punishment they are going to receive if they plagiarize accidentally. Therefore, punishments for plagiarism are too strict because those punishments are not supposed to be “Death Sentences” but guidelines for scholars who are longing for inspiration. 

Sunday, September 15, 2013

homework#3

In order to define the word “literacy”, the author use the word “discourse” as a “identity kit” to explain and help us to understand “literacy”. Because the author thinks that there is a strong connection between the discourse and literacy.
Firstly, form the author's view discourse means “the appropriate costume and instructions on how to act and talk so as to take a particular role that others will recognize”. (Gee P 257) Discourse includes primary discourse and secondary discourse. After that the author shows five deeper points about what discourse is and what qualities discourse has.

Then author points out that literacy in some parts is like discourse, literacy is the control of secondary discourse. By making a level of using language such as first use of language and secondary use of language authors point out her ideas that “literacy is control of secondary uses of language” which means literacy is not just basic skill of understanding and speaking, it should be in a higher level and used in a formal condition. Author also shows an argument about whether leaning view is better or acquisition view is better. She points out that acquisition view is a better way for studying however we always study more throughout the learning view. In the end of debate, she provides how this two ways work in real world. She concludes that we always use both ways to study and transfer from this way to another in different condition. In the end of the article, as a linguists, the author exhibit some suggestions about learning an acquisition a language.


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James Paul Gee's opinion about literacy:
In this passage, the author intend to define what is "literacy". But first of all, he introduces a term "discourse" which means "a socially accepted association among ways of using language, of thinking, and of acting that can be used to identify oneself as a member of a socially meaningful group or social network"(p 258) . Then, he emphasizes 5 important features of discourse, which alludes to the fact that discourse is ideological, resists to internal criticism and scrutiny, relates to other standpoints even the opposite ones, requires value and sense and could be affected by social power and historical features. 
Second, the author makes a distinction between acquisition and learning. He demonstrates that acquisition is a subconscious process with trials and errors which always happens in natural settings when people learn first language; while learning is a conscious process of studying gained by teaching and officially training and proportional to some degree of meta-knowledge about the matter.(p 259)
Finally, he discusses about the primary discourse,which developed in the very beginning at home in oral, and the secondary discourse, which gained during socialization, totally beyond the primary discourse and much more focus on the uses of language. Therefore, he asserts that literacy is mastered by acquisition, accelerated by learning and controlled by secondary discourse. Hence, he writes about some suggestions to future language training and directions of researches.

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ORIGINAL:
To define literacy, Gee first introduced the term discourse. In his words, discourse is "a socially accepted association among ways of using language, of thinking, of acting that can be used to identify oneself as a member of a socially meaningful group or 'social net work'".

Then, he pointed out several points that people can make about discourse, such as "discourses is inherently ideological" as Gee speaks, and the discourse people make is determined by his/her position(managers make different discourse from workers), and so on.

In Gee's viewpoint, literacy is not merely a question about whether one can read the letters a loud. Therefore, he introduced acquisition and learning. acquisition and learning have different function. Acquisition, is better for performance while learning is better to get metalevel knowledge and we can know more when we are learning. However, there is a balance between acquisition and learning. He takes reading class as an example. Student studying grammar is stressed since their studying mode is learning. On the other hand, children are acquiring reading since they are exposed to read a lot.

Besides learning and acquisition, he also defined primary discourse and secondary discourse to clarify the problem about literacy. As Gee sees, primary discourse mainly involves with one and his/her intimates. However second discourse is basically referring more to people other than intimates, like schools and churches. Therefore, as Gee says, "literacy is control of secondary uses of language." and "literacy is mastered through acquisition, not learning".

He further demonstrates the idea by using the example of children with different backgrounds. Black children differ from middle class children is not because of their own style of english, but their primary discourse. What is more, not like middle class children who is both acquiring and learning in school to get critique views, children with no opportunities to acquire secondary discourse, can't get the metalevel skills since it requires certain acquisition for secondary discourse.


RIVISION:
To define literacy, Gee first introduced the term discourse. In his words, discourse is "a socially accepted association among ways of using language, of thinking, of acting that can be used to identify oneself as a member of a socially meaningful group or 'social network'".

Then, he pointed out 5 points that people can make about discourse:
1.       “Discourse is ideological.”
2.       “Discourse is resistant to internal criticism & self-scrutiny.”
3.       “Discourse is also defined as “standpoints taken up by the discourse in other opposing discourses.”
4.       “Discourse grows at the expense of others.”
5.       “Discourse is related to social power.”  (all from Gee, p258)

After that, Gee pointed out the difference between acquisition and learning. “Acquisition, is better for performance while learning is better to get metalevel knowledge and we can know more when we are learning.”(Gee, p259) For example, when a non-Japanese speaker studies Japanese grammar, the terms he learnt may not be familiar with a native Japanese-speaker, although the Japanese-speaker can definitely create more complicated sentences.

Besides learning and acquisition, he also defined primary discourse and secondary discourse to clarify the problem about literacy. As Gee sees, primary discourse mainly involves with one and his/her intimates, like family. However second discourse is basically referring more to people other than intimates, like schools and churches.

What is more, Gee believes "literacy is control of secondary uses of language."(Gee, p261) and "literacy is mastered through acquisition, not learning"(Gee, p261). Therefore, he further demonstrates the idea by using the example of children with different backgrounds. Black children differ from middle class children is not because of their own style of english, but their primary discourse. Moreover, not like middle class children who is both acquiring and learning in school to get critique views, children with no opportunities to acquire secondary discourse, can't get the metalevel skills since it requires certain acquisition for secondary discourse.

In the end, Gee gave several suggestions to teachers:
1.       Non-mainstream children should receive acquisition, instead of learning, to help them master literacy.
2.       It’s better to know the strengths of learning and acquisition and combine them.
3.       Mainstream students use more acquisition.
4.       “Learning should lead to the ability for all children to critique their primary and secondary discourses.” (Gee, p262)

5.       Don’t give up non-mainstream children just because they have challenges to master dominant secondary discourses.

Homework #3

What’s Literacy? The author defined literacy as “the control of secondary uses of language” (Gee, 261). In this definition, “control” means “use” and “function”.  “Secondary uses of language” means using language to communicate with non-intimates, who do not share a great deal of knowledge because of the difference between family or cultural background. Therefore, the author believes literacy is the use of language to communicate with people who have different social backgrounds.


Educators normally make students literate by teaching them. However, the author believes that acquisition, acquiring knowledge without the process of teaching, and learning play different yet important roles in making students literate. One masters discourses, which is certain way to speak or behave that represents one’s identity, in this case, mastering a different language, through acquisition. Besides, learning is extremely helpful when one needs to critique or compare one discourse with another because no one should make any judgment of another discourse before master the discourse. Therefore, the author believes educators should guide students to make choices between learning and acquisition while they study a language.